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Is She? (Contemporary LGBT Humour)
Nope. 0 stars. An obsessed and very creepy girl, moves into a shitty apartment because she fancies the looks of a girl that lives there. I felt very uncomfortable throughout the whole story and was hoping the lead would learn something by the end and reflect but I didn't see her doing that. She just ended up with her best friend who she never realised had a mutual crush on her.
— Aug 09, 2020 02:56PM
Nope. 0 stars. An obsessed and very creepy girl, moves into a shitty apartment because she fancies the looks of a girl that lives there. I felt very uncomfortable throughout the whole story and was hoping the lead would learn something by the end and reflect but I didn't see her doing that. She just ended up with her best friend who she never realised had a mutual crush on her.
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Delicious (Contemporary Lesbian Romance)
3 stars "She had been obsessing over this woman all year, practically stalking her and putting everything else on hold, putting her life on hold, [...]" Yeah, that's not healthy. A pining woman too afraid to make a move, that is certainly a realistic trope. This story has erotica in it, so if that's not something for you...
— Aug 11, 2020 05:21AM
3 stars "She had been obsessing over this woman all year, practically stalking her and putting everything else on hold, putting her life on hold, [...]" Yeah, that's not healthy. A pining woman too afraid to make a move, that is certainly a realistic trope. This story has erotica in it, so if that's not something for you...
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The Black Hound (Victorian Gothic Werewolf Suspense)
4 stars. A good gothic horror short story. Not much is explained but one can gather what is happening by paying attention. A very nice read.
— Aug 11, 2020 05:08AM
4 stars. A good gothic horror short story. Not much is explained but one can gather what is happening by paying attention. A very nice read.
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Mask of the Highwaywoman (Historical Action Adventure)
4 stars. Hey, this one was actually really nice. A cliffhanger ending but since this short story was apparently the set.up for a novel that's to be expected.
— Aug 11, 2020 04:50AM
4 stars. Hey, this one was actually really nice. A cliffhanger ending but since this short story was apparently the set.up for a novel that's to be expected.
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Reason to Stay (Lesbian Teen Humour)
2 stars. So this one was odd. First of all I don't see the humour in it, though the middle part is quite nice. It starts with another slightly stalkerish protagonist and it ends in a very, very odd way that does not feel realistic. But at least this story knew it did not need chapters.
— Aug 10, 2020 02:43PM
2 stars. So this one was odd. First of all I don't see the humour in it, though the middle part is quite nice. It starts with another slightly stalkerish protagonist and it ends in a very, very odd way that does not feel realistic. But at least this story knew it did not need chapters.
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The Lady Edris and the Kingdom in a Cave (Adult Myth & legend, Authurian Adaptation)
3 stars. It was alright, maybe a bit underdeveloped, though the skeleton-plot is solid. Nothing very fancy but an enjoyable quick read. There were 11 chapters in this one, each read in roughly 2 minutes.
— Aug 10, 2020 08:46AM
3 stars. It was alright, maybe a bit underdeveloped, though the skeleton-plot is solid. Nothing very fancy but an enjoyable quick read. There were 11 chapters in this one, each read in roughly 2 minutes.
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Enthralled (Lesbian Vampire Thriller)
maybe 3 stars. It is short but gets the drama across. The lead is unlikeable and possessive but I assume that was intended since it falls in line with the plot. Again, there are chapterbreaks where none are needed.
— Aug 09, 2020 01:24PM
maybe 3 stars. It is short but gets the drama across. The lead is unlikeable and possessive but I assume that was intended since it falls in line with the plot. Again, there are chapterbreaks where none are needed.
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In Rhythm (Contemporary Teen Romance)
2 stars at best. I expected more from a short story about ballroom dancing but there is not much realism about how competitions work in here. Also not sure why this needed chapters, it would have been fine without them.
— Aug 09, 2020 06:07AM
2 stars at best. I expected more from a short story about ballroom dancing but there is not much realism about how competitions work in here. Also not sure why this needed chapters, it would have been fine without them.
