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The Gadget Broker by Jelani-Akin Parham
The first part of this story was pretty tense and exciting but it felt like it fizzled out at the end.
ZOWSZA by Mackenzie Reide
This was a cute little story. A little heavy on the exposition but overall I liked it.
— Aug 11, 2020 07:54PM
The first part of this story was pretty tense and exciting but it felt like it fizzled out at the end.
ZOWSZA by Mackenzie Reide
This was a cute little story. A little heavy on the exposition but overall I liked it.
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Good Vibes by Raphael Sutton
The idea behind this story was fun and I liked the way it described the scientific process, but the writing style with the shifting POVs was kind of weird.
Ines of Carter Station by J.D. Cadmon
Nothing too complex, but still a sweet little story about what a girl can accomplish when she's encouraged by the adults around her.
— Aug 11, 2020 07:54PM
The idea behind this story was fun and I liked the way it described the scientific process, but the writing style with the shifting POVs was kind of weird.
Ines of Carter Station by J.D. Cadmon
Nothing too complex, but still a sweet little story about what a girl can accomplish when she's encouraged by the adults around her.
Sarah
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PLEASE ASSIST by Denise Sutton
Extremely stupid story with an annoying main character. "Oh I'm so sad because my mom says she loves me in a tone I don't like and the kids at school make fun of me for being a redhead, might as well just die." Hard pass.
— Aug 11, 2020 07:54PM
Extremely stupid story with an annoying main character. "Oh I'm so sad because my mom says she loves me in a tone I don't like and the kids at school make fun of me for being a redhead, might as well just die." Hard pass.
Sarah
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Override by Janina Franck
I loved this story. Tense and exciting, really natural feeling worldbuilding, and a great ending.
The Better Mousetrap by Thomas Gondolfi
Parts of this were a bit uncomfortable to read because of all the microaggressions but overall this one was okay.
Jupiter Jinx by Kris Katzen
This story REALLY overused the word "azure" and a lot of the characters felt like stereotypes.
— Aug 10, 2020 07:39PM
I loved this story. Tense and exciting, really natural feeling worldbuilding, and a great ending.
The Better Mousetrap by Thomas Gondolfi
Parts of this were a bit uncomfortable to read because of all the microaggressions but overall this one was okay.
Jupiter Jinx by Kris Katzen
This story REALLY overused the word "azure" and a lot of the characters felt like stereotypes.
Sarah
is 75% done
The Robotics Badge by Margaret A. Hanson
Okay full disclosure, my friend wrote this story. It was charming and lighthearted, and the solution to the problem was really funny.
Beta Test by A.A. Jankiewicz
This story was okay, but I thought the ending was kind of a downer and I didn't like the main character very much.
— Aug 10, 2020 07:39PM
Okay full disclosure, my friend wrote this story. It was charming and lighthearted, and the solution to the problem was really funny.
Beta Test by A.A. Jankiewicz
This story was okay, but I thought the ending was kind of a downer and I didn't like the main character very much.
Sarah
is 61% done
A DDREAM That Flies by Andrew K. Hoe
Things seemed to wrap up a little too easily in this one, but the worldbuilding was neat and felt original.
— Aug 09, 2020 11:04PM
Things seemed to wrap up a little too easily in this one, but the worldbuilding was neat and felt original.
Sarah
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Save the Fighting Marmaloots by Monty Harper
This story was okay but I thought the "justification" for one character being nonbinary was kind of weird.
Scraps by George Ebey
I liked the way that Auddy’s decision sparked change in others, but this story sort of equates being disfigured with being evil and I'm tired of that.
— Aug 09, 2020 11:04PM
This story was okay but I thought the "justification" for one character being nonbinary was kind of weird.
Scraps by George Ebey
I liked the way that Auddy’s decision sparked change in others, but this story sort of equates being disfigured with being evil and I'm tired of that.
Sarah
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Wheelchairs in Space by Nicole Iversen
This was so fun. I liked the way every scenario took Jacinta’s disability into account. Not so sure about the pirate speak though.
— Aug 08, 2020 07:59PM
This was so fun. I liked the way every scenario took Jacinta’s disability into account. Not so sure about the pirate speak though.
Sarah
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Chloe’s Last Stand by Abby, Nathan, and Russ Colchamiro
This one was okay, but the solution to the problem was way too simple and it felt like the sequel to a more exciting story.
Critical Breakdown by T.A. Hernandez
I liked this one a lot. Interesting setting, exciting caper, great ending.
— Aug 08, 2020 07:59PM
This one was okay, but the solution to the problem was way too simple and it felt like the sequel to a more exciting story.
Critical Breakdown by T.A. Hernandez
I liked this one a lot. Interesting setting, exciting caper, great ending.
Sarah
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The Girl with Silver Feet by Jennifer Lee Rossman
Fun little Wizard of Oz retelling, but it also felt too short. Things were just starting to pick up when it ended.
— Aug 07, 2020 07:33PM
Fun little Wizard of Oz retelling, but it also felt too short. Things were just starting to pick up when it ended.
Sarah
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Escape from Arxia Prime by Joanna Schnurman
This one was so fun. Great caper, fun characters, cool setting.
The Adventure of the Crab Bisque by M.L.D. Curelas
The story wasn't that exciting but I appreciated a different setting from any of the other stories.
— Aug 07, 2020 07:32PM
This one was so fun. Great caper, fun characters, cool setting.
The Adventure of the Crab Bisque by M.L.D. Curelas
The story wasn't that exciting but I appreciated a different setting from any of the other stories.
