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Wendy
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Not sure how much more I can take. No contractions make all of the could not and would nots robotical. The language is atrocious. No one needs that much language for their characters.
— Aug 06, 2013 06:49PM
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Wendy
is on page 409 of 503
Well, much better now that I am nearing the end. Gotta stop for the night.
— Aug 07, 2013 07:39PM
Wendy
is on page 202 of 503
Really, really getting annoyed with Ellie. God help us all if this is typical 18 year old behavior now.
— Aug 07, 2013 03:56PM
Wendy
is on page 62 of 503
Ok, I am getting into it now. I just have to overlook the excessive language and grammar issues. The story is getting better.
— Aug 07, 2013 12:30PM
