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““Republicans make themselves look like idiots, and that’s to our advantage.” Greg nodded. “We’ll have the presidential nominee on Saturday while they’ll keep fighting for another two weeks. Democrats show unity, Republicans chaos and dirty tactics. Have you seen that ad that Thompson’s team made about McDouglas?””

Author’s political lean obvious. Totally not needed in the story.

This mess has to stop!

“Then the door opened and there they was—”

There they WAS?????

And again...

“It was after Sam finished his second toast <——-

“his second piece of toast” would be correct.

Located two paragraphs from the other. There are grammatical mistakes on every page like this and it’s distracting.

If grammar mistakes like this keep happening, it’ll knock a star of the final review:

“And as he sat there at the kitchen table and watched barely-dressed Blake making them toasts <——-

It’s “make them toast...”