the kevin (vaguely alive)’s Reviews > Kestrel's Talon > Status Update
the kevin (vaguely alive)
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Not sure I like the unblockable telepathy, no one gets to keep their thoughts to themselves, surely the telepaths could learn to block out others thoughts? Otherwise how would they function in large populations? Seems like a ploy to introduce jealousy and drama more than anything useful
— Sep 30, 2020 07:19AM
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the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 65% done
Stopping mid story for grim?? What the actual fuck
— Sep 30, 2020 09:02AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 63% done
Honestly nothing has happened in this book yet
— Sep 30, 2020 08:35AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 63% done
Should have worked the backstories in more smoothly, flashbacks are disorientating
— Sep 30, 2020 08:18AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 60% done
Talon really has no sense of morals, invading and altering people’s minds for his own gain
— Sep 30, 2020 08:10AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 59% done
Don’t understand the pattern of forgiveness vs grudges here, surely mine invasion should be much more angrily received than anything else...? Fucked up
— Sep 30, 2020 08:06AM
