the kevin (vaguely alive)’s Reviews > Kestrel's Talon > Status Update
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 52% done
wtf what a shit “reunion” scene, real unhealthy all around
— Sep 30, 2020 07:50AM
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the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 65% done
Stopping mid story for grim?? What the actual fuck
— Sep 30, 2020 09:02AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 63% done
Honestly nothing has happened in this book yet
— Sep 30, 2020 08:35AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 63% done
Should have worked the backstories in more smoothly, flashbacks are disorientating
— Sep 30, 2020 08:18AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 60% done
Talon really has no sense of morals, invading and altering people’s minds for his own gain
— Sep 30, 2020 08:10AM
the kevin (vaguely alive)
is 59% done
Don’t understand the pattern of forgiveness vs grudges here, surely mine invasion should be much more angrily received than anything else...? Fucked up
— Sep 30, 2020 08:06AM

