Elithanathile’s Reviews > Undisputed > Status Update

// Annnnnnd the authors HAD to destroy this book not only with their stupid typos and grammatical errors, which I’ve managed to gloss over and dismiss, but they had to add the lunatic publicist who’s clearly in love with one of the MCs, and as if that wasn’t enough, they added this raging jealous beard-cunt named Kathy into the mix! Dude, this is where I tap out! The over the top soap opera drama is ludicrous!!

// That’s it, I’m removing one star for all of this “I could care less” snafus!
It is I COULDN’T CARE LESS!!!! Some authors need to get it through their thick heads!! It is not endearing for you to force your nonsense onto your characters ... your characters are not ignorant, you are, when you consistently insist on grammatical bullshit, so speak and write correctly!!

1. We’re constantly being told they’ve grown incredibly close and share a lot of things and confide in one another, and while we get little glimpses of that, it’s always in retrospect and there’s always the paraphrasing of it all, so I want to see a lot more show and a lot less tell!
2. You can’t refer to edible underwear as edibles, edibles are something very specific! For fuck’s sake, authors, come on!!

// “Fuck me, please. Fuck me so hard! I want to walk out of here limping!” Aiden flirted.”

~ Dude, as hot and sexy as fuck as that is, that’s not flirting, that’s a demand! A scorching hot demand, but a demand nonetheless!

// For fuck’s sake, authors, you have one job to do, do it right!!!!
😡😡😡!!
The tragedy here is that it is coming across like a good book and a good story, but the shitty writing in terms of the grammar and bullshit typos on behalf of both authors is absolutely ludicrous/ridiculous and obnoxious as fuck! The authors are to blame and they’re pissing me off right now with their lazy nonsense!!

// AGAIN ... LOOK —>> “I know that nothing will ever come between us, but I can’t get him out of my mind.”

~ Authors, for fuck’s sake, you mean nothing will ever happen between us! To say it the way you wrote it means that they are already together, or solid, and nothing can tear them apart! Well that maybe true in the future, it isn’t now! So you actually mean nothing can ever happen!!

// The book is starting off really engaging and interesting, but the typos and blatant grammatical mistakes or destroying the experience!! It’s like taking a perfectly great dish and shitting on it ... I mean, why?!? These authors are pissing me off right now! Sharpen up!

// Just another example of the lazy ass writing and bullshit typos/grammatical mistakes: “Belgium waffles” ... DUDE, it’s BELGIAN waffles!! You don’t say France fries, you say French Fries! You don’t say Italy Food, you say Italian food!! I hate when shitty writing happens to good books and lazy ass authors happen to good stories!!

// Damn that description and Aiden’s fantasy is fucking hot is hell and I mean SCORCHING 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥!!

// Wow there are so many typos! That is so unacceptable!!