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Midlight Shard
is 47% done
Promising beginning. Unfortunately, I'm at the halfway point and it feels like we aren't going anywhere.
The author inserted some philosophical musings into their writing, which I liked the first few times but after a bit it felt forced.
I like the main characters, for the most part. I do have issues with Felix, who is akin to a child psychologically speaking. I don't think the lore can justify his psychology.
— Oct 18, 2020 03:13PM
The author inserted some philosophical musings into their writing, which I liked the first few times but after a bit it felt forced.
I like the main characters, for the most part. I do have issues with Felix, who is akin to a child psychologically speaking. I don't think the lore can justify his psychology.
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Midlight Shard
is 48% done
It feels like the author has no idea what to do with her story. The MC went from living with a death sentence over their head to finally wanting to live a little, which is good, but also the MC starts to question the validity of their relationship with Felix--and how justifiable it can be, when Felix is a vampire who has to terrorize people to feed off of them. It's a just concern but the writing makes it feel forced
— Oct 18, 2020 03:15PM
