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Carmen
is 30% done
I don't know what to think. The story is good but the writing is really jumpy and grammatically strange at times and the character interactions are often awkward. I guess I'll just keep going for now...
— Aug 22, 2013 10:18AM
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Carmen
is 51% done
I'm glad I stuck with it. The story really is good and the writing improved somewhat. It's still really weird in places though.
— Aug 22, 2013 02:41PM
