Becky’s Reviews > Declan > Status Update

I'm currently 55% in. The premise was good and it started off strong but the writing began to fall short as the story progressed. Repetition within the same paragraph. Phrases (he was lovin up on her) that made me wonder about the age of the author. The depth of the H and h varies from setting to setting making me question not only the age but the life experience of the author. Might keep reading. Might quit.