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Chapter 28 has a detailed recap of everything that previously happend. Why? Shouldn't this be at the beginning of book 2?
— Nov 17, 2020 08:52AM
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Vortech
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Deus ex machina. Need your Mary Sue to be a warrior? No problem just read this spell book. Shazam!
— Nov 17, 2020 10:15AM
Vortech
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I can see the influence of Dungeons and Dragons. The writing is good but the storytelling is flat. I am not inspired.
— Nov 17, 2020 08:25AM
Vortech
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I can see the influence of Dungeons and Dragons. The writing is good but the story telling is flat. I am not inspired.
— Nov 17, 2020 08:21AM
