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😖 Needs some editing. Super awkward dialogue. Example 1. "I almost did not shit my pants."
2. She prodded with foot the horse, and the animal instantly rushed into the density of green leaves.
3.“Can anyone explain what is happening?” The situation had completely knocked Emmett out of understanding what was going on. “The princess…hunting as well?” “Yes.” Sprout smiled. “But not for those for whom we are.
— Nov 19, 2020 10:01AM
2. She prodded with foot the horse, and the animal instantly rushed into the density of green leaves.
3.“Can anyone explain what is happening?” The situation had completely knocked Emmett out of understanding what was going on. “The princess…hunting as well?” “Yes.” Sprout smiled. “But not for those for whom we are.
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Oiy! I'm not sure I can finish this.
“Listen,” Sprout cheerfully said, “do you remember us at that age? Doesn’t this whole situation remind you of anything?” He recalled to the king how they, when young, just same way famously discovered these forests with young Princess Aurra. Every day they had such fun.
— Nov 19, 2020 10:06AM
“Listen,” Sprout cheerfully said, “do you remember us at that age? Doesn’t this whole situation remind you of anything?” He recalled to the king how they, when young, just same way famously discovered these forests with young Princess Aurra. Every day they had such fun.
