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is 61% done
This really is bad...too coincidental. And poorly written. No one speaks like that. Too forced.
— Sep 01, 2013 03:36PM
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I'm not sure if the wrong comma usage, the misspellings, and the general lack of proper grammar and sentence structure is the fault of the author or te publisher/editor, but either way, it's distracting!
— Aug 31, 2013 08:35PM
