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is on page 183 of 251
"...he felt passion's white-hot claws raking his loins into readiness, torrents of blood pouring through him" (183) gotta be honest, claws raking one's loin is not the first metaphor that comes to mind when thinking about getting hard, but that's just me
— Nov 25, 2020 06:34PM
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elstaffe
is on page 117 of 251
"The castle resembled an explosion in a pasta factory more than a stately building, but the children insisted that all things built on a beach were castles, and this mess was no exception." (117)
— Nov 24, 2020 06:53AM
elstaffe
is on page 12 of 251
"'What I don't know won't hurt me, right?'
'Wrong, thought Mandy. Ignorance can kill. But she hadn't known that at his age, so she could hardly blame him now." (12) what. What is this nonsense foreshadowing that never really plays out? (Spoiler alert)
— Nov 24, 2020 06:53AM
'Wrong, thought Mandy. Ignorance can kill. But she hadn't known that at his age, so she could hardly blame him now." (12) what. What is this nonsense foreshadowing that never really plays out? (Spoiler alert)
elstaffe
is on page 10 of 251
"D.M. Sutter was very impressive indeed, whether it was as a land reclamation specialist, as a futurist or simply as a man." (10) in what way is he a futurist?? Other than that he works for a charity whose goal is to save the earth for posterity I guess
— Nov 23, 2020 04:36PM
