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Characterization of Idaan so far makes no sense. If she has Borderline, it's unconvincing,and anything else seems bogus.I think we're coming to the reason I stopped reading Expanse series: Abraham ultimately fails at writing female characters - Idaan is a caricature of "hysterical feminist" so far, and plot holes are too much:she planned for cloak-and-daggers in a gossipy environment, but not for keyes?
— Nov 26, 2020 10:11PM
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A Shadow in Summer notes (3.5/5)
- awesome prologue
- would like to see more of Seedles
- all characters are idiots when the plot needs it syndrome (why did O kill H? makes no sense)
- the setting believable and now I want to eat ginger and go to the market; vast world I want to explore more
- social norms not completely clear, hope for more clarification (women in business but not poets?)
— Oct 14, 2020 02:40PM
- awesome prologue
- would like to see more of Seedles
- all characters are idiots when the plot needs it syndrome (why did O kill H? makes no sense)
- the setting believable and now I want to eat ginger and go to the market; vast world I want to explore more
- social norms not completely clear, hope for more clarification (women in business but not poets?)
