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Dierdra McGill
is on page 121 of 290
I was enjoying this but the over use of the same actions is really annoying. "A roll of the eyes was given" and "she hid her smile behind her hand" It is starting to get really old, reading that over, and over.
— Sep 03, 2013 05:37PM
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Dierdra McGill
is on page 121 of 290
Forgot to add the horrible plot holes! For instance, at one point they said the next day the town is holding a faire, now there is no mention of them going at all.
— Sep 03, 2013 05:40PM
Dierdra McGill
is on page 59 of 290
The writing is not great, but so far enjoying the story, enough anyway.
— Sep 03, 2013 01:47PM
