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Marisa
is 10% done
Very cool premise. A few stylistic writing quirks keep pulling out of the story, though, especially because it’s such a well-acted audiobook, so it’s really jarring when the narrative suddenly summarizes whole conversations that ACTUALLY, I want to hear, because worldbuilding.
— Nov 29, 2020 10:24PM
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