MostlyDelores’s Reviews > Broken Bridges > Status Update
MostlyDelores
is 30% done
Really pretty bad. The premise is ok, but the writing is clunky and awkward.
— Sep 12, 2013 07:34AM
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MostlyDelores
is 90% done
"Dax's slick fingers moved in and out of the other man's ass like warmed butter on hot bread."
Who's hungry?
— Sep 12, 2013 06:08PM
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MostlyDelores
is 90% done
Paging Joolz. Joolz, to the Reviewing Room, STAT. "Without preamble, Dax centered two fingers on Adin's winking rectum, and pushed forward"
— Sep 12, 2013 03:45PM
