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AlligatorSmith loves to read
is 76% done
Great book! I am surprised to be liking the story in this one a bit more than Breathing His Air. But I do; Raul is a hot biker and agent, and he's not reticent n showing both his alpha side and the side that really loves Crystal. The only real downfall is the lack of consistent editing, especially wrong words and spelling errors that throw me out of the storyline.
— Sep 12, 2013 07:48PM
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AlligatorSmith loves to read
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Loved this book, and it got better with each chapter. Raul (first seen in Breathing His Air) is a hot alpha biker with and interesting side job that makes every minute more dangerous than the next. He's so obviously in love with Crystal, but they're both trying to make up for past mistakes, and sometimes that gets a little trying for their relationship. One of the things that I really liked about the previous book
— Sep 13, 2013 07:04AM
AlligatorSmith loves to read
is 27% done
Went directly to this one after Breathing His Air. Liked Tori from that one better than Crystal from this one, but that may just be the hangover from Breathing, where she was an annoying character. Lots more editing problems in this one, unfortunately. One of the things I liked about Breathing was its lack of errors that bog so many MC stories down.
— Sep 11, 2013 06:34AM
