Becky ’s Reviews > Undressed > Status Update

Very slow start! Now she is all over this guy and even has a nickname that she calls him every 20 seconds. Describing them doing it with these words does not make a scene hot and maybe a thesaurus would be helpful... I'm sure cream and squirt were used like 30 times in that scene. Not feeling the connection between these two characters or understanding the big fabric "emergency" that has brought them together.