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"She had the most seductive and deep, green eyes I've ever seen. Just before her mysterious eyes disappeared into what seemed like dark silk over her shoulders, I noticed the slightest inkling of a smile on her lips. Her milky white skin, rosy red lips and long dark hair made her look so pure, fragile and very Snow-White-like, but she had the eyes of a seductive Greek goddess."

Oh no, not again, please.
Sep 20, 2013 07:59AM
The Last Strand

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el Argh. And to think the beginning was actually good, not at all judge-the-book-by-its-cover-material. I shall read on for a bit though, because except for two of these - descriptions the story is actually interesting.


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el Me too! Thanks :)


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