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Why would L.Garcia be interested in Brittany? I’d be more intrigued by a cardboard box! Why couldn’t a decent character be written for this?

One thing I can’t stand! A good plot coming together staring an awful character! Couldn’t Shaylin be in this situation instead? Was it too much to ask to have a good heroine??

So far the best character in this book is Princess ( a small fluffy dog that so far hasn’t had any signs indicating she has a personality at all but is yet more interesting then the ‘main characters’).

Feel slightly let down with the latest heroines I’ve read by Ashers. We had educated queens like Myra & Amelia, Warrior Sweethearts like Adeline, Alisha & Joslyn and hardworking bosses like Krystal, Shaylin and Paisley but the flimsy Kayla, annoying / crazy Jean, irresponsible ( but otherwise bearable ) Bailey, egotistical Britney and dull / dissociated Grace characters are not measuring up!

Ew Britney being low-key Egotistical/ narcissistic isn’t self love! By all means be confident/feel sexy but by your description it’s apparent that you aren’t ‘extra hot’ or a ‘Luscious woman’ so why say it constantly? Have some class! it’s clearly a fantasy created due to your arrogance, also the dull/boring and annoying personality sucks! She’s not heroine material & better off as a side character.

Brittany needs to tone down the mentioning her size every 2 mins, we get it, your chubby....so what? Bringing it up all the time isn’t ‘SeLf lOvE’ it’s weird... be proud of your body by all means but damn talking about yourself 24/7 isn’t cute at all.