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Mehsi
is 21% done
*sighs* I am just not getting into this one... The story jumps around, and I find it a shame that we get some earlier dates as flashbacks, it just doesn't feel natural or OK.
— Jan 12, 2021 01:49AM
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Mehsi
is 10% done
Not too sure about this one yet... it is OK, but I would have liked to see a better introduction into how they got into the sugar stuff, because now it felt like we come in the middle of the book... But I do like the sugar stuff now that I have read a few pages of it. I am a bit doubtful if the spionage is going to work.
— Jan 10, 2021 02:53AM
