Ann’s Reviews > A Note in the Margin > Status Update

Nope. I‘m out. Can‘t do it. These two don‘t know anything about each other but are soooo in love? Nah.

I find it curious that John’s previous job has not been mentioned at all apart from the year’s leave. My guess is that it might somehow be connected to David’s current situation. But I hope I’m wrong on this.

This story comes close to insta-love and anyone who knows me knows how much I dislike it. The actions of the characters feel driven by plot and not natural to their personalities. Not sure I’ll finish this.

Oh for crying out loud. Now there are THREE povs on one page??

I *really* dislike it when an author switches from a character’s POV to another one between paragraphs.