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is 7% done
So far, so bland.
Got an ARC, but can't bring myself to sing sycophantic chants for this.
The flow of the story is un-endearing, doesn't hold the attention of the reader.
Like this- "Her fists at the end of stiff arms as she headed for the back door to the garage."
This is a complete sentence and even with the context provided, reads as awkward as it does now.
— Jan 24, 2021 11:27AM
Got an ARC, but can't bring myself to sing sycophantic chants for this.
The flow of the story is un-endearing, doesn't hold the attention of the reader.
Like this- "Her fists at the end of stiff arms as she headed for the back door to the garage."
This is a complete sentence and even with the context provided, reads as awkward as it does now.
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