Gracie’s Reviews > The Girl Who Cried War > Status Update

Talia’s dad calls Romy outside because he wants to talk to his daughter and her boyfriend. Romy is somehow surprised he knows they are werewolves even though she called for reinforcements though her fathers connections.

Anna’s relationship is so last second and forced. It was so last minute and No effort. A lame relationship for a lame character seems fitting.

Explained by “it was magic” but not making sense. Even magic needs to have some rule’s and make sense. It feels like a cheap cop out.

The transitions between one place to another after getting worse and worse

He’s not behind me anymore!
“Are were ready?” He asks from behind me.

It’s just very lazy writing in this book. The all the characters feel shallow and cheesy. This book had so much potential but it just feels like the authors rushed it.

Kash went from standing close but not in a smothering way to pulling her into his arms again. There’s a transition missing.

The use of calling everyone a whore is almost as repetitive as the number of times Kash missed the top of her nose. It’s like the authors just stopped caring by this point

Now she’s extra special. Not only mastering being a shifter after a two second explanation, but now she has special unheard of powers. All with absolutely no effort or reason.

Another thing highly reminiscent of twilight. Newly turned and somehow great at controlling themselves

“What is it, girl? Did Timmy fall down the well?” Talia asks.
Probably the best line from the series so far.