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"extravagancies" is normally extravagances, but acceptable as Laina's style of speech, if repeated again elsewhere.
— Oct 12, 2013 01:52PM
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Anne Patkau
is 30% done
If ch6 picture is Laina, why does "short-cropped" hair look like slicked-back ponytail? I do like images of spaceships.
ch7 what is "trinket" recruits stole? More questions than answers so far -- keeps me going ..
— Oct 12, 2013 01:26PM
ch7 what is "trinket" recruits stole? More questions than answers so far -- keeps me going ..
