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All those Legos Caimi has been doling out?
Finally starting to put some together.
Be prepared to memorize LOTS of character names.
Chpt 6
— Jan 30, 2021 02:31PM
Finally starting to put some together.
Be prepared to memorize LOTS of character names.
Chpt 6
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Kris
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Starting Chpt 36
Other than a few grammar mistakes, this is turning out to be an Epic tale. LOTS of details to keep track of. Not something you want to read while tired. Action has been consistently building, but it's taken a bit to get used to all the deaths. Anxious to see who actually makes it to the end.
— Jan 31, 2021 06:48PM
Other than a few grammar mistakes, this is turning out to be an Epic tale. LOTS of details to keep track of. Not something you want to read while tired. Action has been consistently building, but it's taken a bit to get used to all the deaths. Anxious to see who actually makes it to the end.
Kris
is on page 58 of 404
Beginning Chpt 4. Initial impressions?
1. This feels like I've been dropped in the middle of series. I kept having to backtrack because of non sequitur info. The author assumes, everyone sees what's inside their head. We don't.
2. Sentences are choppy. Action doesn't flow. Constant scene shifts w/no context.
3. Nascient plot is finally coming together.
4. Strange names are annoyingly hard to pronounce in my head.
— Jan 28, 2021 03:33PM
1. This feels like I've been dropped in the middle of series. I kept having to backtrack because of non sequitur info. The author assumes, everyone sees what's inside their head. We don't.
2. Sentences are choppy. Action doesn't flow. Constant scene shifts w/no context.
3. Nascient plot is finally coming together.
4. Strange names are annoyingly hard to pronounce in my head.
