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Houston, we have a problem. In the Prologue. There is a HUGE difference between EXERCISING your demons and EXORCISING your demons. In the first instance, you are making them strong and healthy, and in the second, you are destroying/ getting rid of them. Like, I can't even right now. Should I continue with this book?!
Feb 03, 2021 03:16PM
[Dis]content (Judgement of the Six, #5)

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Ch. 10- another "could care less" that shouldn't be couldn't care less.
Feb 03, 2021 08:37PM
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Ch. 8- On the subject of Chinese food, I've never heard of "General Toa's Chicken", but I have heard General Tso's Chicken. did this author EVER ask ANYONE to read this before publishing?
Feb 03, 2021 07:59PM
[Dis]content (Judgement of the Six, #5)


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Ch.6 - you SCARF your food, not scoff.
Feb 03, 2021 06:18PM
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Ch. 4 - The phrase is COULDN'T care less. As in, you do not care anymore for a person or event. There is no more care to be given. When you say you COULD care less, it means you still care some about a person or event.
Feb 03, 2021 05:07PM
[Dis]content (Judgement of the Six, #5)


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Chapter 1 - she bolts from the cage fight, runs to her car, and goes home. Did she REALLY have her car and house keys with her WHILE FIGHTING? What she needed to do was run back into the bar via the front door and GET HER BAG.
Feb 03, 2021 04:03PM
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