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Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 39% done
Structure of plot is an issue. Too much explaining, not enough showing. The only thing making me read on is to learn more about Krimshaw, whose emotions and events being centre to the story.
Oct 24, 2013 03:13AM
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Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 80% done
Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.
Oct 29, 2013 06:47AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 59% done
The plot has finally sorted itself out and now has the drive and passion needed to make a story interesting. The satire is working as a result, and I just wished the book started like this.
Oct 28, 2013 10:51AM
Greegs & Ladders


Joshua Allerton
Joshua Allerton is 26% done
A random sentence was in first person. Despite the character being so, Wilx is becoming excessively annoying with his long passages of explaining. Sounds like an article.
Oct 19, 2013 03:43PM
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