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heidi
is 76% done
I'm liking it less and less as it goes on. I just want the author to show us a little instead of just telling. Makes it hard to buy into the story and become part of it.
— Aug 27, 2010 05:05AM
heidi
is 57% done
Meh. It's an okay story but lacking in background. It just seems like the characters' actions don't have a sound basis.
— Aug 25, 2010 12:16PM

