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'Orlov experienced an extraordinary sensation which felt like relief when surely it should have been apprehension or distaste or something. He opened his mouth to protest and then shut it again and shrugged.' ....Um. Okay. Awkward writing is awkward.
— Oct 30, 2013 03:15PM
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Sarah Mac
is on page 68 of 288
Eh, this is tough. It's kinda stilted & the pace is glacial. It's mildly interesting, but I'm not sure I want to invest the time & finish it. (HQN-time is entirely relative compared to other genres. :P)
— Oct 30, 2013 11:05PM
Sarah Mac
is on page 23 of 288
I dunno, guys. This is already the third time we've explained about Orlov getting into and/or out of his military jacket whilst his arm is bandaged. I GET IT. Can we get on with the plot, please?
— Oct 30, 2013 07:39PM