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Though she was tired, her senses were on alert for any movement. Any person who didn't belong.
So she was jolted with terror when a hand grabbed her arm...
*sigh* Really? Another near rape? Why-just why? Also, you're not alert if you're snuck up on that easily. She didn't notice anything until he grabbed her? (Please note, I'm not blaming her, but pointing out the fallacy in the text.)
— Nov 03, 2013 02:43PM
So she was jolted with terror when a hand grabbed her arm...
*sigh* Really? Another near rape? Why-just why? Also, you're not alert if you're snuck up on that easily. She didn't notice anything until he grabbed her? (Please note, I'm not blaming her, but pointing out the fallacy in the text.)
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Angela
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"You don't look fine," he replied... "Just to be sure, I'm going to walk you the rest of the way home."
"Oh, that's not necessary."
Really? WTF? You were just nearly raped?!?!? Are you stupid?? Ugh.
— Nov 03, 2013 02:46PM
"Oh, that's not necessary."
Really? WTF? You were just nearly raped?!?!? Are you stupid?? Ugh.
Angela
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Anna had always found confident men to be extremely sexy.
Me too...
— Nov 03, 2013 02:32PM
Me too...
