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is 13% done
This is super bad writing. "I'm in and out, fast and furious, down and deep." This is, I assume, supposed to be sexy? Because none of those seem like qualities to extol. Sigh. Anyway, this is a super short story, so I should be able to hang. I think.
— Nov 07, 2013 06:23AM
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