Elithanathile’s Reviews > Dream of a Waking Man > Status Update

// Good deal!!

// The format of this book is fucking weird! Why on earth would it end that way and why use epilogues as continuation? I get what the author is doing because the epilogues are continuation and there will be several of them, with the last one being a wonderful HEA, but still!!

// So instead of charging and arresting the guy that threw a brick at Kyle’s head, the judge is arguing about semantics so he can save his precious fucking ego! That guy better have been pounded by the law!!

// I hate that the guy is even protecting the name of the person that fucked him over and beat him to hell and back! That fucking bigot homophobic kid deserves for Jackson to expose him because what he did was a crime and it was a hate crime at that!

// The author is destroying this book with a lack of editing and proofreading!! The inconsistencies are just pulling me out of the story!!

// Sometimes I wonder just how over-the-top this author is going to go about the ignorance within the United States in the world at large, and then I acknowledge that it’s not just the United States that is full of ignorant, and the States is most definitely full of it, but the world as a whole is incredibly ignorant and bigoted and prejudiced and racist and homophobic and anti-Semitic and all the evil things!!

// This book feels like it’s 10,000 pages long!! So damn verbose and long-winded!!

Also, Kyle not getting a witness was a fucking stupid move indeed!! At least the convo was recorded!!

// This book is riddled with typos!! I’m trying to ignore them but it is worth mentioning!

// The fuck is this author doing? 911 dispatch does not hang up on its callers!! This author’s writing is obnoxious as fuck right now and the over the top bullshit just for the sake of angst is absurd!!

// 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂!!