Selena Pigoni’s Reviews > Why Kimba Saved The World > Status Update
Selena Pigoni
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Cute, but I feel like it's lacking in structure. Where's my story map? Where's my rising action? For something this short, it seems to be ambling around a lot.
— Nov 14, 2013 03:12PM
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Selena Pigoni
is 62% done
Wondering if I should give up on this one too. I hate not finishing things, but I'm losing interest fast.
— Dec 06, 2013 06:14AM
Selena Pigoni
is 50% done
You know, this just feels like it's trying to take itself far too seriously. This would probably make a better goofy short story than a serious chapter book.
— Dec 03, 2013 11:47AM
