P. Kirby’s Reviews > Come As You Are > Status Update
P. Kirby
is 45% done
Eh. At this point, I've reached an object lesson in "show" don't "tell." In this case, where the protagonist has to tell me why she can't commit to a relationship, when it would work so much better to fold this kind of stuff into an actual interaction with the guy. Since I already hit the 45% mark this quick, this prolly won't go the DNF route though.
— Nov 14, 2013 03:40PM
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P. Kirby
is 4% done
Dear Author, the correct usage is "rein in," not "reign in." Grrrrrr. Major pet peeve for this horse person.
— Nov 13, 2013 04:53PM
