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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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This read a bit too much like a biography. A touch boring and a bit dry in many places. Better writing would have done wonders. However the heart of the story is present and well done. None of these ladies’ lives were perfect but they were real.
— Mar 14, 2021 03:54PM
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Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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Sylvia made me the most sad. Her husband didn’t seem like a gambler but at home he was. And she didn’t think she could make it without him. It made me terribly sad.
— Mar 14, 2021 03:45PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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Lyn probably moved me the most with her Polio struggle and panic attacks. The poor alcoholic girl (Margaret?) had three children before she left and went back to England. I admired her for facing that and going back.
— Mar 14, 2021 03:39PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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Ahhhh Rae’s happy ending made me laugh! I’m glad she realized she was too close to that little boy and needed to leave.
— Mar 14, 2021 03:26PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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Gahhhhh this has gotten rather boring. There are these passages that are obviously just historical regurgitation. And they drag the story down. The writing style is bad enough where we’re just told what’s happening rather then really getting to experience it. I was okay with it at first but it takes away any tension about what’s going to happen next. It’s going to be a struggle to finish this.
— Mar 14, 2021 02:56PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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More dry explanations but we’re moving closer to the American mice for the other 3.
— Mar 06, 2021 05:43PM
Dani ❤️ Perspective of a Writer
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The first 60 setting up the girls was quite compelling. Right now at the end of the war it got a little dry but it’s still good. I like the alternating POVs and how they pull us through the story. I feel back for the girl with 2 kids and the drunk. I love Rae and how Ray wooed her.
— Mar 06, 2021 05:31PM

