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Rae Quigley is on page 30 of 242
So far, I love the concept and am excited to keep reading. Author writes beautifully, but I can’t get over how unnatural the dialogue seems. This is a child of an undetermined range talking to her grandfather so formally, it’s like 85 random SAT words smashed into a long sentence for no reason.
Apr 01, 2021 06:09PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 146 of 242
After all that chaos he just walks back in??
Apr 10, 2021 04:57PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 131 of 242
I don’t want to judge another culture and their traditions and idk if this is real or fictionalized but running through towns to cut heads off of people to bury a king like NO THANKS
Apr 09, 2021 02:25PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 125 of 242
Literally eye rolling
Apr 09, 2021 01:58PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 101 of 242
I’m like, hate reading this at this point lmao
Apr 03, 2021 12:59PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 78 of 242
Omg we heard a rustling oh no it’s gotta be a servant oh oopsie guess it was your soulmate you like just totally realized in this exact moment 🙄🙄
Apr 03, 2021 12:32PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 73 of 242
This character is so contradictory. Idk if this is was meant to be, but this is written like a bad diary entry. All of it. “Oh who am I kidding! Of course i like him” 2 line after saying she doesn’t 🤣
Apr 03, 2021 12:26PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 61 of 242
Cool so both her male options are gaslighting her already lol
Apr 03, 2021 12:06PM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 49 of 242
It’s seriously all over the place. It’s like she’s fast forwarding through the character’s life and then pausing on, IMO, inconsequential moments. Why should I care that her grandmother is bringing up someone like Albert? There is zero set up.
Apr 03, 2021 11:56AM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 46 of 242
I just can’t get into it. The book isn’t flowing right. Everything seems so contrived and obvious when it’s only happening to push the plot forward. This Okem “I will marry you” convo is so cringe.
Apr 03, 2021 11:44AM
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Rae Quigley
Rae Quigley is on page 34 of 242
Apr 03, 2021 10:20AM
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