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Jamie
is 36% done
OK... pet peeve of mine... The word PENIS in a book. Penis is just so clinical and not sexy sounding.. let's go with cock, dick, tool, beaver basher... ANYTHING but PENIS!
— Dec 04, 2013 02:37PM
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Jamie
is 15% done
Cute so far... but I'm bugged a bit by the non-use of contractions. It's a bit to wordy. Contractions would definitely be an improvement.
— Dec 04, 2013 10:01AM
