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Gentle build. Relatable protag. Idiosyncratic syntax, felt a bit unnatural at first but suggests an unique voice. The longer I read it, the more I get used to it. Lots of explaining of internal thoughts.
— Apr 02, 2021 06:28PM
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DNF
I think the plot and characters are quite interesting but I really, really couldn't get behind the writing style, which is a very close third person where the characters' internal thoughts are all spelled out for you. I just wasn't enjoying reading it and I couldn't get past all the telling. I might revisit it when I'm in a different reading mood.
— Jun 22, 2021 03:22PM
I think the plot and characters are quite interesting but I really, really couldn't get behind the writing style, which is a very close third person where the characters' internal thoughts are all spelled out for you. I just wasn't enjoying reading it and I couldn't get past all the telling. I might revisit it when I'm in a different reading mood.
