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Chris, the Dalek King
is 33% done
Not to be crass, but naked-time is always ridiculously quick. One would think that these men had no stamina. The book might be suffering from a critical lack of time. Not enough of the relationship is shown, and what is show is usually lacking in chemistry. And, yes, it does feel like if you blink you'll miss the build-up, the countdown, and more importantly, the take-off. Pity, for I do love a good launch.
— Dec 09, 2013 09:01PM
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Chris, the Dalek King
is 52% done
I'm sorry, but Will is way too calm about the whole arm thing.
— Dec 09, 2013 09:40PM
Chris, the Dalek King
is 15% done
There does seem to be a definite lack of zing between these two. And while I understand the need to discuss something like DD, it does read as very clinical and neat. Boring. Hopefully things will pick up soon. Preferably with less clothing a bit more spanking. (A girl can hope, anyways)
— Dec 09, 2013 08:13PM
