Adara’s Reviews > Together Bound > Status Update

This doesn't have page numbers in the paperback, so I'm guessing. It could use another proofing pass though. I thought that 8% in.

Another 1.5% for the 7th scene, and I skipped the 1pg of masturbation scene since it at least had plot purpose.

Oh, no, I was right the first time. Inconsistent.

Well, there was at least a reason for that. *argh* So frustrated.

This doesn't even feel consistent within its own setup. This is awful.

Dammit, I need a new kindle. But at least there was an external reason for it.

#6 1% more sex. And if Nick doesn't tell Todd right now, I'm throwing this kindle.

Really? A demon forces a reaction and he feels ashamed he reacted when he had no choice? Just ugh. I thought Nick stronger than that.

Sorry, that should've been #5 at 41% of the story.

Another 1.5-2%. We'll call those two together 3% for ease of counting. Can you tell I only skimmed the dialogue?