Harold Ogle’s Reviews > Splintered Suns > Status Update

The story structure is like the Arabian Nights, which I really appreciate. "Splintered Suns" is the kind of novel I find extremely encouraging to read: good ideas, great plot, fun characterization...and the writing (word choice and sentence construction) is that of a 12-year-old. It's not bad writing, it's just amateurish. Books like this should be key evidence for everyone that they, too, can write a novel.