Pam’s Reviews > The Human > Status Update

The writing is sophomoric at best. If it were in first person I could understand that it sets the tone for internal monologue, but since it's in third person, it seems that the author doesn't have the skill, or possibly the desire, to write above a high school level. The plot is also relatively unsophisticated and predictable. The characterization is painfully flat. It's hard to read much in one sitting.