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Yeh there’s definitely some weird editorial stuff happening here - the occasional very random sentence being in what must be the wrong spot - and just now a very odd maths mistake.
— Apr 29, 2021 12:54AM
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Alexandra
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Some confusion over spelling. Having an initial french and then English spelling might make sense in some cases, maybe? I guess I can see it for Etienne of Blois being crowned as Stephen. But Saladdin then Saladin is either a typo or weird.
— Apr 29, 2021 12:06AM
Alexandra
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Some confusing bits already - paragraphs that seem to repeat information or have it in an odd order - and he’s just repeated that old saw about spices being used to cover the taste of rotting meat.
— Apr 28, 2021 10:23PM
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Page 11 and he’s mentioning a (male) historian who think the Bayeux tapestry was designed by a dude because of the penises. So that’s not a great start.
— Apr 28, 2021 09:39PM

