Kim S’s Reviews > In Plain Sight: The Kaufman County Prosecutor Murders > Status Update
Kim S
is on page 419 of 496
At this point, I'm too far into this book to give up on it, but the clunky writing continues to threaten to give me a migraine. An example: "Not an anomaly, the murders, Wirskye wanted to show, fit Eric’s psyche." I copied that verbatim - I didn't add any commas.
Related sidenote: I don't remember seeing a single semicolon in this book yet. I'm sure they exist, but I don't recall any.
— Apr 30, 2021 04:51PM
Related sidenote: I don't remember seeing a single semicolon in this book yet. I'm sure they exist, but I don't recall any.
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Kim S
is on page 394 of 496
The way this author writes drives me occasionally BONKERS. Take this sentence, for example: "Registered to Kim, the Smith & Wesson held three spent casings, totaling the eight." Why wouldn't you say "The Smith & Wesson, registered to Kim, held" etc.? The writing is frequently clunky and clumsy like this - it's maddening!
— Apr 29, 2021 08:11PM
