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Im so confused with chapter 24. At the very end they were literally right in front of Ballar but didn’t rescue him. I know the author was probably trying to say it was someone else who is impersonating Ballar but it was executed very poorly. I didn’t know who was talking in the end with the moon goddess or Luna because whoever was talking was referencing Luna. Cut to the next chapter Luna and Luke are training.
May 06, 2021 08:29AM
The Broken Vessel (The Chronicles of Luna Moon, #2)

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