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Much repetition so far. An extra editor would have been useful in cutting down most of that.
— May 15, 2021 02:00PM
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Pronouns are a thing. This might be an odd take, but when we switch POV, the MC in that POV shouldn't be referred to with their name. It's making for an odd reading experience, as I keep having to remember who's POV we are currently in as their name keeps being thrown around as though we never switch POVs. We aren't an omnipotent reader, this has POVs, so... like, why constantly name drop the main characters?
— May 16, 2021 01:57AM
