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Rain
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Just random thoughts....'She doth protest too much, methinks'
Still too many grieving widows for my taste, I get them mixed up as they sound the same with only an occasional stand-out.
— May 16, 2021 05:02AM
Still too many grieving widows for my taste, I get them mixed up as they sound the same with only an occasional stand-out.
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Rain
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so far...
Too many women in panicky grief. Gets a little repetitive. All sound the same. One black woman in MI5, with "no shits left to give" was nice.
Some moments of poor writing, eg the SF riots...shoot, shooter, shooting..never did find out who shot who.
Quibbles...so far most flaws can be forgiven for being a debut novel.
— May 12, 2021 07:31PM
Too many women in panicky grief. Gets a little repetitive. All sound the same. One black woman in MI5, with "no shits left to give" was nice.
Some moments of poor writing, eg the SF riots...shoot, shooter, shooting..never did find out who shot who.
Quibbles...so far most flaws can be forgiven for being a debut novel.
